Writer in Residence

Draft 23, come in please your time is up!

I went to a talk by Australian author Kate GrenvilleShe was such an eloquent speaker with a soft caramel voice that melted in the ear, I believed every word she said. I absolutely adored her Orange prize winning book, The Idea of Perfection, and I often use her writing exercises for my workshops. What spoke to me most, of all the things she said, was that her current book, Sarah Thornhill, went to 23 drafts! The only reason it wasn’t more was the fact that the publishers were becoming pretty desperate for it. That news should be encouraging to most writers I should think, and she believes the first draft is always the hardest as the rest is just revision. Here is a line from her new book which jumped out, with its beautiful simplicity, whilst she was reading.

…white birds roosting in trees like so much washing.

 

Here are some quotes I noted down as she talked about her new book and writing in general.

 

In writing about an illiterate, rural, working class woman:  ”The art was to conceal the art.”

 

She finds “ the world a fascinating place.” And, in researching her plots, she must try “walking on the spot, connecting to the place. I found a little piece of blue and white china. It could have been her tea cup.”

She likes misfits. “The surface is never the story. What is the reality beneath it? All of humanity is in all of us.

On her schooldays. “I was short-sighted. The world was blurred to me, but a book was vivid.”

Of coming to Britain. “ London freed me. I was in that kind of hypersensitive, skinless place. I wrote lots of short stories, lots of unpublished novels, trying to work out who I was.”

On writing. “ The whole creative moment is absolutely fascinating. You have to leave behind everything you are taught at school all that clever-clever stuff. You need to tune into the other side of the brain and be humbly receptive and not try to ride it like a horse. It is the most incredibly enriching thing in life and you make discoveries you can only make in writing.”

 

What’s an apostrophe between friend’s?

Oh heck. I’ve got posters all round town advertising the Writer’s Café and I’ve been reliably informed it should be Writers’ Café. The former would be OK, of course, if I was always sat there on my own sipping a cappuccino. As that never happens, it’s very popular actually, either people don’t mind that I, as a proper published author, am crap at punctuation, or they just don’t know the rule themselves.

Now, I’d like your opinion on the following thoughts. And before you all write in, all two of you, the title to this piece is ironical, OK?

1.Personally, I think it’s better to know the rules, as I more or less do, yet sometimes still get them wrong, than never, ever know the rules in the first place. You may disagree, but a kind of blind panic happens in my head when I have to do a final edit of a piece. I tend to vomit  early drafts onto screen without worrying too much about tricky stuff like spelling and punctuation, just go with the flow, then I struggle with dots, dashes and commas at the end.

2. That the rules are just too complicated. Though I realise punctuation is important for understanding and flow and breathing and all that, you know what, I actually believe most of us get what the idea is and understand what’s going on even if it’s not quite right. It’s a bit like trying to learn French: there are so many instances of the same words used for different meanings and the teacher will say, oh but you’ll understand it in context. Well, I think most of us get the context about punctuation. And I know a book like Eats, Shoots and Leaves  is a great read and has examples on the subtlety of punctuation, but I’m not a subtle writer.

3. The idea in the writing is the most important thing: getting the words and thoughts the right way round; finding just the right word for the right feeling; describing with just enough detail for a reader to picture it all and want to go on. (And this last sentence was really hard to punctuate and I’ve no idea if really I’ve done it correctly, but you still get what I mean, don’t you?)

So, I don’t mean don’t have any punctuation at all. I don’t mean make really awful, stupid blunders all the time and never learn. I mean that, as long as the intention is there, a nod to the rule, as long as the author is making some sense of a story and it isn’t too stiliting, then what’s the problem? I sometimes think it is too easy a stick for pedants to wave over we sensitive, creative types. Luckily, I’m completely shameless and the joy of writing and making stuff up overrides any terror of getting a comma or apostrophe in the wrong place. If it didn’t, I really would give up. So, I also believe a lot of creativity is squashed by such fears in a lot of people.

So, Writer’s caff, tues pm, 330, for people wot want to write, OK?

 

 

A Window on Writer’s cafe.

Writer’s Café goes on attracting new interest. There’s a piece in the Milford on Sea newsletter this week and Chris, the owner of Inger-Lise’s where we meet, has even done a literary window display in our honour. This session – every Tuesday 3.30pm onwards - came about after chatting with Chris one day as she’s keen to encourage something like this. As I see it, if J.K.Rowling could write in that caff in Edinburgh, why shouldn’t we? Except we don’t write much, it being more of a social gathering with a bit of literary chit-chat thrown in; a sort of Bloomsbury group in Milford, with better dress sense and more chuckles. Mostly, it’s regulars from my afternoon writing group and whoever else turns up, and they do, proving literary types abound in the area. Ray Peirson is one of them, seen here in the photo next to me, both clutching our books. We writers need to get out more we really do and this is the ideal opportunity. Our chats vary, from life generally, to anything about writing. Last week one of the group read out a poem she’d written, another week we did a mini writing exercise and we talk a lot about books. It’s all go, I tell you, but I look forward to more such interesting chats in weeks to come, fuelled by excellent cakes.

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Both Tuesday workshops are resuming from the 10th Jan.   At 2-3.30pm or 7.30-9pm at Milford on Sea Community Centre.

And Writer’s Cafe continues at Inger-Lise’s coffee bar  Tuesdays, 3.30-4.30pm

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